Wanan, Oyasuminasai - College Application Essay

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Each day when I wake up, I am given choices. It has taken me 19 years to grasp the understanding of this simple concept. For years, I would make the decision to dwindle away precious time; but no longer will I continue this pattern.

My Movie Scene - College Application Essay

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We all learn in different ways. It is up to us to tweak the world to cater to our needs. That’s what smacked me in the face recently when I had one of those straight-from-a-movie near death experiences involving some rogue emboli.

Who am I? - College Application Essay

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Many people ask me, who am I, I’m a hardworking student who has a goal to accomplish. My goal is to become a doctor. I had this goal since I was a kid, even though I don’t remember why I wanted to become one.

Rivers Cuomo - College Application Essay

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What I’ve Been Up To Since I Left School by Rivers Cuomo

I Accept...You - College Application Essay

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Dear University of Chicago,

Football - College Application Essay

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I have learned a great many things from participating in varsity football. It has changed my entire outlook on and attitude toward life. Before my freshman year at [high-school], I was shy, had low self-esteem and turned away from seemingly impossible challenges.

Latvia - Common Application Essay

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I grew up in Latvia. The stage of fairy tales. Where Sleeping Beauty lay and Snow White hid from the wicked witch. This enchanted setting sheltered me from the turmoil of my birthplace. Barely safe from the grip of communist Russia, Latvia was as uninviting as a Siberian winter.

Porkopolis - College Application Essay

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In the South, where I grew up, pork is a vegetable. Actually, it’s used as a “seasoning,” but so commonly that it’s almost impossible to find salad without bacon, greens without fatback, white beans free of pinkish shreds of ham.

Rachel - College Application Essay

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As a child, I never used to be comfortable expressing myself. While others would play together and make friends in a heartbeat, screaming and laughing playing catch or tag, I would hide in the sidelines, wishing I was invisible. I was afraid of other people.

Religion - College Application Essay

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I sat on a frayed brown chair in the dilapidated but cozy old room at school called the assembly hall. Before me was a semicircle of five sage men; I listened to them, fully engrossed and enraptured by the wisdom their wisdom.

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